good stuff, but the portal is no place for WIPs
use the dumping grounds for these, and then link them to the appropriate animation forum for feedback or critique
Really thought it was a screamer for a while.
It really does convey such a powerful message about riding safely.
Well, this was an awfully cute little piece on burritos and disappointment.
Nice work on this fairly well made li'l short.
This is an awfully lovely short.
This is one of the best card-carrying 'first animation' movies I've seen.
Often, when one sees 'this is my first go at animating' in the Author's Comments, one would suspect it being foul and blammable.
Not this one.
An adorable, charming and swell music video on friendship.
Good job with the lip-syncing on the animation, mate.
Well, it was charming.
- The animation needs a little work, feels primitive to today's standards.
+ The animation was colorful and was enough of a visual demonstration of your views and whatever you were talking about.
+ The animation was nostalgic, reminded me of the animations of old that were pretty basic and had used lots of tweening.
+ The writing felt natural and was indeed informative.
- It felt more like a lesson in the Horeshoe theory than an expression of your opinion, so that was a little misleading.
- The audio is clunky, get a better microphone or tweak the audio using Audacity (that program's free so get it, for the sake of making your movies better)
- There was a point in the movie where you recorded the audio with what seemed to be a storm going on, so try to record the audio in a soundproof place next time, if you can.
All in all, 2.8/5.
I enjoyed it, but it needs a helluva lot more work put into it-- increase the quality of these informative shorts so people'd like it better-- maybe end up on the frontpage someday.
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